You think the hard part is writing the novel until you hit the editing phase. Suddenly, you’re not battling writer’s block; you’re wading through tangled plot threads, fuzzy character arcs, and magic systems that don’t play by their own rules. It can feel overwhelming, especially from the outside looking in.

But here’s the truth: editing doesn’t have to be a monster lurking under your desk. Stepping into this phase with the right mindset and a clear strategy makes the editing process far less intimidating and much more empowering. Unlike writing, which thrives on momentum, editing calls for calm, distance, and a whole lot of thoughtful reflection. It’s the phase where you get to slow down and truly see your story.

So if you’re a fantasy author staring down the edit or already knee-deep in revisions, this guide is here to walk you through it.

Why Editing Matters for Newbie Authors

Let’s be real, editing can feel overwhelming. Maybe you’re wondering: Can’t I just fix the typos and call it a day? Or, isn’t editing the editor’s job?

Here’s the thing: self-editing and professional editing are both part of the fantasy writer’s journey, and they work best together. Self-editing helps you spot the gaps, clarify your vision, and tighten your storytelling before anyone else even sees the manuscript. And when you do bring in a professional editor (especially one who knows fantasy), they can take your worldbuilding, pacing, and structure to the next level.

Fantasy is a genre that demands clarity and consistency. You’ve likely invented names, cultures, histories, and maybe even languages. A single inconsistency, a character teleporting out of nowhere, or a spell breaking its own rules can pull readers out of your world. That’s why editing isn’t optional. It’s the bridge between your imagination and your reader’s immersion.

Pro Tip: Before you dive into edits, build yourself a self-editing timeline. It’s like a map through the chaos, keeping you focused, organized, and less overwhelmed.

Editing Tips for Fantasy Authors

Imagine wandering through your own enchanted forest; you know the way, but suddenly every tree looks the same. That’s exactly how editing your story feels. Fret not; these editing tips are here to lighten your path.

1. Re-enter Your World Like a Reader, Not the Creator

Once you’ve finished your story, step away. Seriously, take a week off. Then come back with fresh eyes and read your manuscript like a first-time visitor to your world. Resist the urge to edit as you go. Instead, take notes. Where does the story drag? Where are you confused, even though you wrote it? Those are the spots to look at more closely during revisions.

2. Watch Out for Plot Holes & Loose Ends

Fantasy thrives on internal logic. If a character walks through a wall in chapter five, but the story never explains how, readers notice. Track your plot’s timeline, map character decisions, and make sure every “why” has a “because.” Plot holes are sneaky, but with a critical reread, you can catch them before your readers do.

3. Strengthen Your Worldbuilding Without Info-Dumping

It’s tempting to explain everything about your world up front. After all, you’ve spent ages building it! But readers want to discover your world, not get a lecture on it. Instead of dropping chunks of exposition, try folding details into dialogue, setting, and character choices. Show us the world through the eyes of someone who lives in it.

4. Magic Systems Need Rules (and They Need to Stick to Them)

Whether your magic is elemental, ritual-based, or chaotic, it needs clear boundaries. What can magic do, and what can’t it? If a character suddenly gains powers just when they need them most, the tension disappears. Define the cost of magic and stay consistent. Power with limits is far more compelling than magic that solves everything.

5. Characters Drive the Quest, Not the Other Way Around

Fantasy plots can get… big. Prophecies! Kingdoms at war! Dragon rebellions! But don’t lose sight of your characters. They should have agency, flaws, and emotional arcs. A plot that happens to your characters is less engaging than one shaped by their decisions. Revisit your scenes and ask: Is this moment about the world, or about how the world is changing them?

Still Wondering Where to Start?

Maybe you’re staring at your manuscript and wondering: Is this even any good? Or you’ve revised it five times already and still feel like something’s missing. Trust me, you’re not the only one.

Editing a fantasy novel is like casting a spell with dozens of moving parts. You’re managing characters, magic, politics, and pacing; sometimes it’s hard to tell if it’s all working. That’s where I come in.

At Once Upon A Manuscript, I help fantasy authors polish their stories while preserving their unique voice. Whether you’re wrangling plot threads or just need a constructive critique on your manuscript, I’m here to help make your story the immersive, unforgettable journey it’s meant to be.

So, are you ready to take your manuscript to the next level? Let’s make some magic, together.