You’ve poured your heart into every page, every line, and every word — let’s make sure your readers feel it.

BOOK EDITING SERVICES FOR FANTASY & ROMANCE 

Readers can always tell when a book has been written with care and passion. When you have the right editor in your corner, we can make sure they’ll be turning your pages faster than you can say, “once upon a time…”

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You can’t wait to share your story with readers. But if questions like these are keeping you up at night…

Does my protagonist’s character arc feel natural, or does it seem rushed? 

Did I miss a typo on page 74 that could pull readers out of the story?

Is my magic system consistent, or is it creating unintentional plot holes? 

Did I accidentally mix up the names of those two minor side characters?

Will readers stay hooked, or will they DNF halfway through?

…it’s time to work with a fantasy and romance book editor who will get your story publication-ready.

Once Upon A Manuscript Editing Services

For authors, the right editor is like the wise wizard that helps you complete your hero’s journey (getting your books into the hands of your readers!) Here are the ways we can work together to get more people obsessed with your book.

Your Fairy GodReader

COMPLETE DEVELOPMENTAL & LINE EDITING

For authors who have completed their first draft, and now need help refining both the big picture of their story, and the tiny details on each page.

How do you take your story from first draft, to sweeping readers off their feet? With a Fairy GodReader of course.

As your Fairy GodReader, I step into your story like a well-placed spell: not to change what makes it uniquely yours, but to help it shine in its full glory. Whether you’re preparing to self-publish, query agents, or submit to editors, this complete developmental and line editing service is here to make sure your manuscript is ready to charm even the most skeptical reader.

This service includes:

  • Full Developmental Edit
  •  Full Line Edit
  • Editorial Letter & Marked-Up Manuscript, 
  • 60-Minute Editorial Debrief Call
  • Two Weeks of Post-Edit Email Support


Starting at $2,000

Mini Manuscript Critique

CRITIQUE OF YOUR FIRST 10 PAGES

For authors who have finished at least part of their manuscript, and want feedback on what kind of first impression their book is giving for both publishers and readers.

Get some valuable feedback on your story so you can finish or refine your first draft with clear direction and a vision for bringing the world you’ve created to life. This service can be booked at any time to see what kind of first impression your manuscript gives.

This service includes:

  • Big-picture feedback on your first 5–10 pages 
  • Light in-line comments 
  • A personalized action list 
  • A Loom video walkthrough 
  • A 30-minute consultation (recorded) 
  • 2 weeks of email follow-up support


Pricing: $147

How about some ad-hoc editing services?

Concentrated support on a chapter, short story, or portion of your novel.

Your StorySmith

STANDALONE DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING

This is for the writer who needs high-level feedback on characters, plot, themes, and pacing.

If you’re asking yourself whether that plot twist works or if readers will love your characters enough to write fanfiction about them, then you’re ready for developmental editing.

I’ll journey through your manuscript to uncover areas where plot points can be tightened, characters can be deepened, and pacing can be perfected — all while staying true to your original vision.

Starting at $0.05/word

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Your Magic Pen Polisher

STANDALONE LINE EDITING

This is for the writer who needs help tightening up the grammar, sentence structure, and flow of their prose.

If your manuscript’s grammar, sentence structure, or spelling need a touch of fairy dust, I’m here to help.

Whether you’re hoping to self–publish or take the traditional route, I’ll help you refine every sentence to ensure your story reads like a well-crafted spell. Together, we’ll elevate your transitions, diversify your sentence structure, and clarify your prose — all while preserving your one-of-a-kind voice.

Starting at $0.05/word

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"I was stuck in the weeds, thinking my fantasy novel was never going to come together"

But Nina took the time to break everything down for me and gave me specific, actionable advice. I’m seeing my manuscript through a completely different lens now!"

- sarah

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My Crystal Ball…

How do I know if I need developmental editing or line editing?

How do I know if I need developmental editing or line editing?

Developmental editing focuses on plot, structure, pacing, characters, and worldbuilding — the big-picture story stuff. 

Line editing hones in on the flow of language, sentence clarity, and voice. 

In my Fairy GodReader service, you get both. Great stories need both strong bones and beautiful language, but since you might have different priorities at different points of the writing process, I’ve separated these out into two different services.

Do I really need to invest in editing services for my book?

How do I know if I need developmental editing or line editing?

I get it — hiring an editor is an investment, and there are no guarantees in publishing. But here’s the thing: when we work together, I’m not just helping you tweak a draft. I’m making sure your story has all the elements that leave readers hooked and publishers paying attention. 

Think of it as an investment not only in this book, but in your growth as a writer. You'll walk away with a stronger craft, new tools, and more confidence in your voice.

Don’t I get an editor if I pursue traditional publishing?

Don’t I get an editor if I pursue traditional publishing?

Totally fair point! Editors do come with traditional publishing contracts — but only after a manuscript has made it through the slush pile. That means you have to stand out from page one. Working with me gives you a major advantage: a polished, professional-level manuscript that shows agents and publishers your story is ready for the spotlight.

In other words, working with an editor improves your chances of getting picked up by a traditional publisher.


What kinds of writers do you work with?

What kinds of writers do you work with?

I specialize in working with unpublished and self-published authors writing fantasy, romance, or romantasy. If you’re early in your writing journey or still figuring things out, you’re in the right place.


Are you going to rewrite my story?

Are you going to rewrite my story?

Not at all! My number one goal is to enhance your story — not change it. I’m here to preserve your voice and all the magic you’ve created while helping your manuscript reach its full potential.

How long will this process take?

How long will this process take?

It depends on the project and service. Most projects are completed within a month, but I’ll confirm your specific timeline once I’ve reviewed your materials. And once we begin, I’ll keep you updated every step of the way, so you’re never left guessing.

Will your feedback be harsh?

Will your feedback be harsh?

Never cruel, always honest. I’m thoughtful, thorough, and deeply invested in helping you succeed. I’ll tell you what’s working, what’s not, and how to fix it — with a healthy dose of encouragement and zero ego. (Okay, maybe a little sugarcoating. I’m a Cancer, after all.)

Why pay for editing if I have beta readers or critique partners?

Why pay for editing if I have beta readers or critique partners?

Beta readers are awesome — but I offer a professional perspective that’s structured, strategic, and rooted in both craft and market expectations. I’m not here to skim or praise. I’m here to help you level up your work with industry-aligned insights and deep editorial care.

Can I book you if I’m not writing fantasy or romance?

Can I book you if I’m not writing fantasy or romance?

Maybe! If your project has strong character arcs, speculative or magical elements, or emotional resonance, I’d love to hear more. Reach out with details and we’ll see if it’s a good fit.

Do you offer payment plans?

Do you offer payment plans?

Yes — for services over $500, I offer flexible payment plans to help make the investment more manageable. Just let me know what you need.

How far in advance should I book?

How far in advance should I book?

I typically book 1–2 months out, though I occasionally have sooner availability. If you're on a timeline, reach out early so we can plan accordingly.

Will you help me get published?

Will you help me get published?

While I don’t pitch agents or publishers, I do help get your manuscript submission-ready. I can guide you on next steps, whether you’re querying, self-publishing, or prepping for beta readers.

When you work with me as your editor, you won’t be handing your book off to someone who’s hunting for flaws…

To me, editing isn’t about “fixing” a book — it’s about nurturing your story and shaping it into its most captivating, spellbinding form. 

You can breathe a sigh of relief knowing that you’re entrusting your story to someone who understands it, respects it, and is over-the-moon excited to help it shine. 

Listen: I know you've poured your heart into this story — you deserve to work with someone who's equally invested in making it shine.

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